Saturday, April 18, 2009

Poem written by a student

Poetry  Break:

Introduction:
This poem was written by a student of mine. Listen closely as I read it, and enjoy.

Reasons Why I don't Focus
by Asher J

music
guitar
write it up

talking
texting
dude what's up!?!?

daydreams
questions
thoughtfulness

dirty 
bedroom
what a mess!!!

playing
fighting
lots of fun

boyfriends
best friends
nothing done.


Allow the poem to sink in for a minute, then reread it again.  After reading it the second time, ask students to list reasons they don't "focus".  Make a list on a large sheet of paper or white board as they name their reasons.

After making an extensive list, reread the poem again. 
If time allows, use this as a Poetry lesson and encourage students to choose one of the reasons they listed as a topic to write a poem about.  

Another way to extend the poem would be to allow students to line up and each read 1 word out loud from the poem. It would be fun to hear this poem read in a variety of different voices, and to see how the students emphasize the word they are reading.
Reasons Why I don't Focus.  Asher J.  Venture Home School Program. 2009.

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